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PostSubject: Quinn   Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:59 pm

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Alt Name: Quinn

A brief description of your character: A young, athletic looking human fellow with a chip on his shoulder. His well kept appearance belies the image of a warrior he tries to convey.

Why/How is your character in Skuldhellir: He came to seek fame and fortune as a member of the Fighter's Guild. More importantly, he's escaping a few things: his short stint as a soldier that ended with him deserting, and the wrath of his family and peers.

Strengths:
Natural:
Athletic/Fit
Strong
Quick Witted
Manipulative

---Learned:
Above Average Swordsmanship
Shield Bearing
Armor Use (Wears chain)
Brawling

Weaknesses:
Inexperienced (In life and combat)
Low Versatility
Poor Awareness in Large (6+) Combat.


This MAY be unbalanced.
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PostSubject: Re: Quinn   Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:43 pm

Strengths:
1. Athletic/Fit; 2
2. Strong; 2
3. Quick Witted; 1
4. Manipulative; 1

5. Swordsmanship; 3
6. Shield Bearing; 2
7. Armor Use; 2
8. Brawling; 2

Weaknesses:
1. Fairly inexperienced; 3-4
2. Low Versatility; 3
3. Poor Awareness in large combat; 3

Totals:
Strengths = 15
Weaknesses = 9-10

There might be a sliiight unbalancedness, according to just how inexperienced he is (at least, there's were my uncertain scoring came in), but it probably isn't too bad. Personally I like this fighting fellow-- he's the one you drew in the Character Construction board, yes?

Other thoughts, folks?

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PostSubject: Re: Quinn   Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:45 pm

I'd throw a couple more weaknesses in there!

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PostSubject: Re: Quinn   Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:13 pm

I'm trying to not have a stupid amount of weaknesses that I'll forget SO:

General:
Alt Name: Quinn

A brief description of your character: A young, athletic looking human fellow with a chip on his shoulder. His well kept appearance belies the image of a warrior he tries to convey.

Why/How is your character in Skuldhellir: He came to seek fame and fortune as a member of the Fighter's Guild. More importantly, he's escaping a few things: his short stint as a soldier that ended with him deserting, and the wrath of his family and peers.

Strengths:
Natural:
Athletic/Fit
Quick Witted
Manipulative

Learned:
Above Average Swordsmanship
Shield Bearing
Armor Use (Wears chain)

Weaknesses:
Inexperienced (In life and combat)
Low Versatility
Poor Awareness in Large (6+) Combat.
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PostSubject: Re: Quinn   Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:28 am

I understand that, for sure-- there've been times where I've had so many weaknesses that I forget em. Before I say if more should be added even in this revised list, let's look at the new numbers (since I changed none, just removed what is no longer there):

Strengths:
1. Athletic/Fit; 2
3. Quick Witted; 1
4. Manipulative; 1

5. Swordsmanship; 3
6. Shield Bearing; 2
7. Armor Use; 2

Weaknesses:
1. Fairly inexperienced; 3-4
2. Low Versatility; 3
3. Poor Awareness in large combat groups; 3

Totals:
Strengths = 11
Weaknesses = 9-10

That's better, certainly. He doesn't really feel like he needs more weaknesses; all the ones he has fit the sort of character he is, and they have larger numbers (as you see, no 0's, 1's, or 2's). If you want to be safe, another weakness could be added, but personally I think with this list he's alright.

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PostSubject: Re: Quinn   Tue Apr 13, 2010 3:57 am

Strenghts baleeting for the win. I can live with these new numbers. All good to go, I'd say.
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PostSubject: Re: Quinn   Tue Apr 13, 2010 11:08 am

Methinks it works out now!

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PostSubject: Re: Quinn   Tue Apr 13, 2010 1:25 pm

Let's take a looksie!

STRENGTHS

1. Athletic and fit: 2
2. Quick-witted: 2
3. Manipulative: 1
4. Above-average swordsmanship: 3
5. Shield bearing: 2
6. Armor use: 1

WEAKNESSES

1. Inexperience: 3
2. Low versatility: 3
3. Poor awareness in combat containing 6+ fighters: 2

Strengths Total: 11
Weaknsses Total: 8

Well done! Thank you kindly, Serinman. Quinn's accepted.

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