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Lazer cheap on friday
Posts : 45 Join date : 2010-03-30
| Subject: Quinn Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:59 pm | |
| General: Alt Name: Quinn
A brief description of your character: A young, athletic looking human fellow with a chip on his shoulder. His well kept appearance belies the image of a warrior he tries to convey.
Why/How is your character in Skuldhellir: He came to seek fame and fortune as a member of the Fighter's Guild. More importantly, he's escaping a few things: his short stint as a soldier that ended with him deserting, and the wrath of his family and peers.
Strengths: Natural: Athletic/Fit Strong Quick Witted Manipulative
---Learned: Above Average Swordsmanship Shield Bearing Armor Use (Wears chain) Brawling
Weaknesses: Inexperienced (In life and combat) Low Versatility Poor Awareness in Large (6+) Combat.
This MAY be unbalanced. | |
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Lauren Fuzzbutt
Posts : 270 Join date : 2010-03-31 Age : 32 Location : Location, location, location!
| Subject: Re: Quinn Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:43 pm | |
| Strengths: 1. Athletic/Fit; 2 2. Strong; 2 3. Quick Witted; 1 4. Manipulative; 1
5. Swordsmanship; 3 6. Shield Bearing; 2 7. Armor Use; 2 8. Brawling; 2
Weaknesses: 1. Fairly inexperienced; 3-4 2. Low Versatility; 3 3. Poor Awareness in large combat; 3
Totals: Strengths = 15 Weaknesses = 9-10
There might be a sliiight unbalancedness, according to just how inexperienced he is (at least, there's were my uncertain scoring came in), but it probably isn't too bad. Personally I like this fighting fellow-- he's the one you drew in the Character Construction board, yes?
Other thoughts, folks? | |
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Heimdall Hornbearer
Posts : 415 Join date : 2010-03-29 Age : 104 Location : Bifrost
| Subject: Re: Quinn Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:45 pm | |
| I'd throw a couple more weaknesses in there! | |
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Lazer cheap on friday
Posts : 45 Join date : 2010-03-30
| Subject: Re: Quinn Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:13 pm | |
| I'm trying to not have a stupid amount of weaknesses that I'll forget SO:
General: Alt Name: Quinn
A brief description of your character: A young, athletic looking human fellow with a chip on his shoulder. His well kept appearance belies the image of a warrior he tries to convey.
Why/How is your character in Skuldhellir: He came to seek fame and fortune as a member of the Fighter's Guild. More importantly, he's escaping a few things: his short stint as a soldier that ended with him deserting, and the wrath of his family and peers.
Strengths: Natural: Athletic/Fit Quick Witted Manipulative
Learned: Above Average Swordsmanship Shield Bearing Armor Use (Wears chain)
Weaknesses: Inexperienced (In life and combat) Low Versatility Poor Awareness in Large (6+) Combat. | |
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Lauren Fuzzbutt
Posts : 270 Join date : 2010-03-31 Age : 32 Location : Location, location, location!
| Subject: Re: Quinn Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:28 am | |
| I understand that, for sure-- there've been times where I've had so many weaknesses that I forget em. Before I say if more should be added even in this revised list, let's look at the new numbers (since I changed none, just removed what is no longer there):
Strengths: 1. Athletic/Fit; 2 3. Quick Witted; 1 4. Manipulative; 1
5. Swordsmanship; 3 6. Shield Bearing; 2 7. Armor Use; 2
Weaknesses: 1. Fairly inexperienced; 3-4 2. Low Versatility; 3 3. Poor Awareness in large combat groups; 3
Totals: Strengths = 11 Weaknesses = 9-10
That's better, certainly. He doesn't really feel like he needs more weaknesses; all the ones he has fit the sort of character he is, and they have larger numbers (as you see, no 0's, 1's, or 2's). If you want to be safe, another weakness could be added, but personally I think with this list he's alright. | |
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Ulrin Lightbringer Ropeman
Posts : 269 Join date : 2010-03-31 Age : 33 Location : Skuldhellir
| Subject: Re: Quinn Tue Apr 13, 2010 3:57 am | |
| Strenghts baleeting for the win. I can live with these new numbers. All good to go, I'd say. | |
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Heimdall Hornbearer
Posts : 415 Join date : 2010-03-29 Age : 104 Location : Bifrost
| Subject: Re: Quinn Tue Apr 13, 2010 11:08 am | |
| Methinks it works out now! | |
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Edward Wizamaturr
Posts : 387 Join date : 2010-03-29 Age : 51 Location : tiddly dee, potatoes!
| Subject: Re: Quinn Tue Apr 13, 2010 1:25 pm | |
| Let's take a looksie!
STRENGTHS
1. Athletic and fit: 2 2. Quick-witted: 2 3. Manipulative: 1 4. Above-average swordsmanship: 3 5. Shield bearing: 2 6. Armor use: 1
WEAKNESSES
1. Inexperience: 3 2. Low versatility: 3 3. Poor awareness in combat containing 6+ fighters: 2
Strengths Total: 11 Weaknsses Total: 8
Well done! Thank you kindly, Serinman. Quinn's accepted. | |
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