Talonis Application to Skulldhellir

General:
E-mail (OPTIONAL): Leave a whisper instead. I always answer them!

Alt Name: Talonis

A brief description of your character:
Ashen scale covered the body of this very tall creature, standing at seven-foot-seven, a compliment to the dourness of his appearance and apparent persona. This male was also very strict and possessed a strong-will to go with it. A long, thick mane the shade of a light fawn adorned down his neck was coarse, wiry to the touch. The clothes he wore hinted at ceremonial design: A silken sash adorned the front of his neck, another wrapping from right hip up and through the ornate triple-beaded cinch at left shoulder, and draping over the shoulder's side. non-descript breeches made and tinted the same color as the "robes", held up by a heavy cloth sash tied in a knot in front. Foot-paws went unshod, but socks of white wrapped in bandages adorned each digitigrade leg from knee to the "ankle" *

Why/How is your character in Skuldhellir:
"Cryptic silence is cryptic" **

Magic (OPTIONAL):

N/a.

---Max Preps (1-10):

---Schools:


Strengths:
---Natural: Physically strong, competent at moving large, heavy loads and heavy labor for extended periods of time.
Chest-scales are segmented (like some depictions of fantasy dragons) Harder to penetrate?
Natural toughness of body
Slightly above average threshold for pain.



---Learned: Hand-to-hand combat,
Flexible to some degree (Does stay in physical shape, including stretches.)
In-close fighter, with martial-art influences. Little weapon-use training, prefers to fight bare (no weapons)
Farm work is good workout. Prefers it to training.


---Supernatural:
None.

Weaknesses:

Can't read or write common.
Self-absorbed
Misplaces things frequently.
Can't Aviate. Doesn't Even Try.
No supernatural properties/abilities at current.
Looks out for himself first.

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* Since it boggles me what that part of the digitigrade leg would be called. o.e *headscratch* I'm just a novice here.

** Don't have good reason in mind. had to put in a placeholder.

Looks decent enough at a glance! I'm not going to work any numbers out just yet because I'm not sure if you're done with this (going by your notes), but I figured I'd give you the heads-up that it's coming along nicely!

Gratzi, Signore! I will be working in changes on and off as time allows.

Good morning. I'm not sure if you're still keeping an eye on this application and are totally finish with it, but now that I'm getting back into the swing-of-things myself, I decided to whip up a number sheet for what's posted (thusfar?):

Strengths:
1. Physically strong; 2
2. Scaly chest of STRENGTH; 1
3. Natural toughness of body; 1
4. Higher threshold of pain; 1

5. Hand-to-hand combat; 2
6. Flexible; 1
7. In-close fighter; 1
8. Farm work regiment; 0

Weaknesses:
1. Can't read or write Common; 1
2. Self-absorbed; 1
3. Misplaces things frequently; 2
4. Can't aviate(fly?); 2
5. No supernatural properties; 1
6. Looking out for #1; 1

TOTALS
Strengths = 9
Weaknesses = 8

He turns out balanced, from the looks of things~ (and this is coming from someone who is willing to admit that they're a tad rusty with numbers at the moment). Mediators, does this sheet look alright to y'all?

It looks fine to me. I just haven't cobbled together a sheet myself because Talonis has not yet told us he's done revising the application. :< Perhaps we should move this as inactive?

Let's give it a few days and see if he comes back--maybe try and whisper the alt name he left?

Sounds like a good idea, Heimderp.

I saw Talonis briefly about a week or so ago. Just so we don't take it down he still does plan to get back to it when he has the time.

Oopsie. Doublepost.

*late*

That's fine I think, Kinz-- thank you so much for contacting people. It's been very helpful in mine (and I hope others') dealing with these apps that have been sitting here a long while.


At any rate, Talonis, when you get back around to this app, feel free to drop us a line so we know you're around.

update!!!

General:
E-mail (OPTIONAL): Leave a whisper instead. I always answer them!

Alt Name: Talonis

A brief description of your character:
Ashen scale covered the body of this very tall creature, standing at seven-foot-seven, a compliment to the dourness of his appearance and apparent persona. This male was also very strict and possessed a strong-will to go with it. A long, thick mane the shade of a light fawn adorned down his neck was coarse, wiry to the touch. The clothes he wore hinted at ceremonial design: A silken sash adorned the front of his neck, another wrapping from right hip up and through the ornate triple-beaded cinch at left shoulder, and draping over the shoulder's side. non-descript breeches made and tinted the same color as the "robes", held up by a heavy cloth sash tied in a knot in front. Foot-paws went unshod, but socks of white wrapped in bandages adorned each digitigrade leg from knee to the "ankle" *

Why/How is your character in Skuldhellir:
"The monk is a traveller, searching for his own fortune (read as Treasure) in the vast world. Since he could rest on the ferry ride over rather than walk the way to the next town over, The Dwarven mining town of Skulldhellir was convenient place to stop and retire awhile.

Magic (OPTIONAL):

N/a.

---Max Preps (1-10):

---Schools:


Strengths:
---Natural: Physically strong, competent at moving large, heavy loads and heavy labor for extended periods of time.
Chest-scales are segmented (like some depictions of fantasy dragons). Effective at resisting downward and straight-forward bladed strikes, but a skilled swordsman or knife-user could wedge between them and strike true from an upward angle.
Natural toughness of body
Slightly above average threshold for pain.



---Learned: Hand-to-hand combat,
Flexible to some degree (Does stay in physical shape, including stretches.)
In-close fighter, with martial-art influences. Little weapon-use training, prefers to fight bare (no weapons)
Farm work is good workout. Prefers it to formal sparring


---Supernatural:
None.

Weaknesses:

Can't read or write common.
Self-absorbed.
Misplaces things frequently.
Can't Aviate. Doesn't Even Try.
No supernatural properties/abilities at current.
greed. He's out for fortune and will take donations to his cause in any convenient form he can get.
Naiive--doesn't understand much how the world works aside from basic travel arrangements

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* Since it boggles me what that part of the digitigrade leg would be called. o.e *headscratch* I'm just a novice here.

Sorry I kept the update waiting for a doom's age. College and lack of inspiration are to blame.

Barely any change in my numbers. The last weakness change doesn't affect much. Naivety could be 1-2. Either way, your totals are 9 vs 8/9

Balanced still.