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PostSubject: Dokuja Aka   Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:00 pm

This is NOT Dokuja Aka, the character already applied to SH. When Dokuja was created and during the time around that I had many ideas but in the end I just RPed and added to her as I went. The result was a complex and interesting character but in the end she wasn't the character I had planned. So now, many years later I sat down and started creating a new Dokuja, based on my original ideas and the many new concepts and ideas I have had during the years.
That said I still haven't quite decided on how to handle them but for now I will keep them both since, in the end, they are quite different.

General:

Alt Name: Adelind Scarlett

A brief description of your character:
An alchemists biggest dream! The sorcerer's stone. And with it, the ability to create a custom made living being. Adelind is such a being, designed to rid her master from useless materials and anything else he saw fit and turning it into usable arcane energy. Now, with her master gone, she roams the world in order to seek out pleasure of any kind and size.

Why/How is your character in Skuldhellir:
Why not?

Magic (OPTIONAL):
---Max Preps (1-10):
5
---Schools:
Alteration:
Kuu - [5]
Adelind unlocks the innate power within her, unleashing her very raison d'être. It allows her to bite through and eat anything, digesting it into a gelatinous mass of energy which she 'sweats' out. This can be used by mages or the like to empower their magic though Adelind herself has no use for it.

Strengths:
---Natural:
High level of survival instinct.
Slightly stronger than an average person.
---Learned:
The social game.
Excellent dancer and acrobatic, very flexible as a result.
Fairly good at anatomy and knows basic first aid.
---Supernatural:
Kuu.
Undying - She can't die from wounds nor age. No matter how much damage she receives she will heal completely shortly afterwards.
Aside from her magical ability to eat anything she still has the ability to eat a lot of things without activating it. In other words, as long as she can chew and swallow it, she can eat it but it will not generate anything but potentially painful visits to the outhouse.

Weaknesses:
Balance of the Universe - Considering she can't die she could be an unstoppable killing machine should she decide to be, had it not been for the fact her awesome ability comes at a price. The complete inability to defend herself. Every stab, bite, punch and kick she delivers to someone leaves them unharmed and any potential damage they would've received is delivered to herself. It won't kill her but at the same time it effectively means that if anyone wants to harm her she can't do anything about it.
Bad Luck - In any given situation she might suffer from bad luck, sometimes even dying as a result. Not permanently though, of course.
Mild Claustrophobia - Ever since that time she was mistaken for dead and buried alive, small confined places are very uncomfortable to her. If she is put into a small area with someone else however it doesn't bother her as much.


And that's about it. I hope she's balanced.
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PostSubject: Re: Dokuja Aka   Sat Dec 18, 2010 8:23 am

Finally!

STRENGTHS
1. Magic: 5+1=6
2. Survival instinct: 0
3. Stronger than average: 1

4. Good at social nonsense: 0 (This strength really either comes through or doesn't by how you play her!)
5. Acrobatic: 1
6. First aid and anatomical knowledge: 1

7. Kuu: 0 (already counted in magic)
8. Undying: 5
9. Can eat anything: 2

WEAKNESSES
1. Unable to defend herself, irrevocably susceptible to abuse: 5
2. Bad luck: 3
3. Claustrophobia: 2

Strengths Total: 16
Weaknesses Total: 10

You're exactly one point away from an acceptable difference. I would personally be willing to let it slide, because I'm sure she's got some other weaknesses floating around that you just forgot to put on here, but we'll see what other folk think first!

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PostSubject: Re: Dokuja Aka   Sat Dec 18, 2010 5:09 pm

I find myself agreeing with Ed's numbers (thus shall not be making another numbersheet-- seems kind of pointless at the moment). If there are any other weaknesses, it'd be nice to see them, kupo.

And personally, the undying kind of makes me a tad ":/" faced, but I guess it's balanced out by "Balance of the Universe" so I'll shush on that point now.

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PostSubject: Re: Dokuja Aka   Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:11 am

Hmm....a little weakness should be added, like the rest said.
Else, I'm perfectly fine with everything. We all know ya, yar a nice Rper afterall....and does not use charas as gods among men...*coughslarescoughs*

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PostSubject: Re: Dokuja Aka   Sun Dec 26, 2010 9:24 am

How about:

Extremely Susceptible to Magic
Her skin and hair has over the years become somewhat saturated with the gel she produces. This means that when any spell is cast at her or too close to her it will react. It can be compared to throwing a match at a highly flammable substance except the match is magic and Adelind is the substance.
So in short, she's very weak to magic and doesn't even have to be the target to suffer. If she has fire magic cast upon her she will turn into a flare, if it is ice she will be an icicle etc. The effects she suffers are based on the spell cast since the gel is made to react in accordance with the spell it's supposed to empower.
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PostSubject: Re: Dokuja Aka   Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:41 pm

That's both lulz and awesome. I'd give that a four, and that certainly balances out. (16 vs 14 up from 16 vs 10)

Accepted! Moving accordingly.

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