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Xalia
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PostSubject: Xalia Learteh   Xalia Learteh EmptyThu Jul 22, 2010 10:11 am

General:
E-mail (OPTIONAL): ghostgiven@live.ca

Alt Name: Xalia Learteh

A brief description of your character:
Xalia Learteh is a shy young spellcaster. Since birth, it was fairly obvious that she had a natural ability in it. As she grew older, she grew a particular interest in white magic: that of healing and "buffing" others. White magic does has some self defensive spells, but they are minor. Once old enough, she took off on her own.


Why/How is your character in Skuldhellir:
Being a wanderer at heart, she hopped on a caravan from her hometown, unaware of where it would take her. The ride ended up in Skuldhellir, where she hopes to prove to everyone back home that she can, in fact, live on her own.


Magic (OPTIONAL):
---Max Preps (1-10): 10

---Schools: School of White Magic: 5
The Elemental School of Earth: 1
The Elemental School of Air: 1


Strengths:
---Natural: Nimble, Beautiful

---Learned: Cooking, Can play the lute (though not currently in possession of one), Literate

---Supernatural: N/A


Weaknesses: Very frail, susceptible to disease, socially inept, unable to use any of her healing magics on herself, No combat knowledge whatsoever


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Edward
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PostSubject: Re: Xalia Learteh   Xalia Learteh EmptyThu Jul 22, 2010 2:09 pm

This character appears to have an interesting premise, but she doesn't seem to be very detailed yet; is she new, perhaps?

I would recommend fleshing her out some more! Here's some scores, though:

STRENGTHS
1. Magic: 12
2. Nimble: 1
3. Good physical condition: 0
4. Can cook: 1
5. Can play the lute: 0

WEAKNESSES
1. Frail: 4
2. Susceptible to disease: 3
3. Socially inept: 1
4. Unable to heal herself: 4
5. No combat experience: 3

Strengths Total: 14
Weaknesses Total: 15


She's balanced, but I still feel like there could be more to her!

Any thoughts or suggestions?
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Xalia
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PostSubject: Re: Xalia Learteh   Xalia Learteh EmptyThu Jul 22, 2010 3:34 pm

Yes she is brand spanking new. Fleshed out how? more strengths, and weaknesses would be a start I guess, which i will be editing in right seeing as I have thought some things up.

Edit: In place of good physical condition, I put beautiful, as that would actually be something of a benefit. Added literate in. I also took one "rank" out of earth element magic and moved it into air element magic.
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Edward
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PostSubject: Re: Xalia Learteh   Xalia Learteh EmptyThu Jul 22, 2010 4:02 pm

That's something of a more solid start! I also just caught your desc in-game, so I'm more inclined to approve, given that it shows some further thought was put into the lass. <:

With your changes, your new strength score is 17! (Literacy: 1, new school of magic: 1, beauty: 1) Still balanced.

Moar thoughts, folks?
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Xalia
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PostSubject: Re: Xalia Learteh   Xalia Learteh EmptyThu Jul 22, 2010 9:20 pm

Personality wise, I think that roleplaying will help flesh her out.
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PostSubject: Re: Xalia Learteh   Xalia Learteh EmptySat Jul 24, 2010 4:40 pm

STRENGTHS:
-Magic: 10 + 3 = 13
-Nimble: 2
-Beautiful: 1
-Cooking: 1
-Can play the lute: 0
-Literate: 0

WEAKNESSES:
-Very frail: 3
-Susceptible to disease: 3
-Socially inept: 1
-No self-healing: 3
-No combat knowledge whatsoever: 4

TOTALS:
17 vs. 14

Fine to me! Any further thoughts before this gets moved? :)
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PostSubject: Re: Xalia Learteh   Xalia Learteh EmptySat Jul 24, 2010 4:43 pm

I'd say it looks fine, personally. Can't say much on personality since it doesn't seem to be fully fleshed out, but I usually flesh my characters out a lot while rping them so I'm sure she'll develop more quirks over time. I'd say it looks ready to be moved.
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PostSubject: Re: Xalia Learteh   Xalia Learteh EmptySun Jul 25, 2010 2:30 pm

Approved by me as well! This app looks ready to be moved.
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